Do you like my poem from a g.a.a.s.g.-eous cloud?

Question:hearts drawn and quartered
below the pier
obscured by an ocean's roar
our hips drew near
our lust made content
we stowed our gear
time marched unmolested
towards our deepest fear
eight years gone by
i still shed a tear
when i think back
on our night spent here

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: hearts drawn and quartered
below the pier
obscured by an ocean's roar
our hips drew near
our lust made content
we stowed our gear
time marched unmolested
towards our deepest fear
eight years gone by
i still shed a tear
when i think back
on our night spent here

Not only does this poem have some g.a.a.s.g. but it also has balls! A fine achievement.

I LOVED IT!!! PERFECT 10!!!

KEEP IT UP!!!

AWSOME!!!

ALL I CAN SAY.....AWSOME!!!