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Position:Home>Poetry> Worthy of Love ?Question:I walked alone A solitary loneliness all my own Always good enough to be a best friend But never worthy of love I had convinced myself that this was my lot To always be a big brother A confidante But never worthy of love Friends I have had many Some so affectionat, so close A friend they could confide in But never worthy of love I had given up hope Resigned to permanent singleness A Man rich with friends But never worthy of love Then one day in May You had always been there You were my neighbor Just four doors down I saw you as if for the very first time We had walked the same way I always assumed you a good friend But never worthy of love You were Linda's Friend Elliotts buddy My neighbor and friend But never worthy of love Now it is 12 years from that first time The day I realized that you were there The day we both knew We were worthy of love You are my best friend You are my confidante You are my greatest My only love My Wife Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I walked alone A solitary loneliness all my own Always good enough to be a best friend But never worthy of love I had convinced myself that this was my lot To always be a big brother A confidante But never worthy of love Friends I have had many Some so affectionat, so close A friend they could confide in But never worthy of love I had given up hope Resigned to permanent singleness A Man rich with friends But never worthy of love Then one day in May You had always been there You were my neighbor Just four doors down I saw you as if for the very first time We had walked the same way I always assumed you a good friend But never worthy of love You were Linda's Friend Elliotts buddy My neighbor and friend But never worthy of love Now it is 12 years from that first time The day I realized that you were there The day we both knew We were worthy of love You are my best friend You are my confidante You are my greatest My only love My Wife Wow your wife is a very lucky woman This is a personal love poem to your wife. and for her it will have a very special meaning. To an outside reader like myself though, your stanzas lack punch and as such lacked interest. That of course is my own opinion. It does sound like she is a special lady. Worthy Of Love Poem Reply This is a nice poem it started out slowly There was frustration because Each line but worthy of love for a while. You were patient until you found that right person. I like the last paragraph You are my best friend you are my confidante You are the greatest My only love My wife. Now this is what I call doing this in steps. Delighted to see you've come around to trying your hand at poetry again! See! Very delightful anniversary offering! |