“taken” poem: critique?

Question:ill fated craze
feeling all of my days
drift dementedly to you
im lost inside your gaze
you have stolen me
sown a seed
you're passions have broken in me
besieged me
every time i falter i fall further down
and i swear i cant breathe when you're around
obsequious to my heart and humbled to my knees
i can't mollify what refuses to be pleased
enable me to cherish what i choose
seems to me i have nothing to lose but you
.........................................

my kisses slip
in and out of your face
hanging by this august noose
my soul begins to drain
you have succumbed to me
now i cant be freed
i can not alter what can not be found
my heart cant beat when you come around
you will never let me down
im hanging here until you've sufficed yourself and i am bound
by forces blind to my heart
when im set free my neck is bruised and scarred
i make my escape but fallacy decides to overtake
what is left of me hide
my blood boils inside
im trapped to my surprise
by a love i can no longer deny

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ill fated craze
feeling all of my days
drift dementedly to you
im lost inside your gaze
you have stolen me
sown a seed
you're passions have broken in me
besieged me
every time i falter i fall further down
and i swear i cant breathe when you're around
obsequious to my heart and humbled to my knees
i can't mollify what refuses to be pleased
enable me to cherish what i choose
seems to me i have nothing to lose but you
.........................................

my kisses slip
in and out of your face
hanging by this august noose
my soul begins to drain
you have succumbed to me
now i cant be freed
i can not alter what can not be found
my heart cant beat when you come around
you will never let me down
im hanging here until you've sufficed yourself and i am bound
by forces blind to my heart
when im set free my neck is bruised and scarred
i make my escape but fallacy decides to overtake
what is left of me hide
my blood boils inside
im trapped to my surprise
by a love i can no longer deny

I love your poem and I understand where you are coming from. The only trouble I see with it is that to me it is somewhat vague. I get that you're in love, but what makes this person so special? You should give details about them as well.

Wow, very good. You are good-very talented. Hats off to your poem.