Is my new poem any good?

Question:Portrait of Ignorance, Beauty Bestowed

Hold me back, pull me down,
Away from this dangerous place I’ve come to love.

The fear, the hurt,
Too comfortable of a feeling.

How is this black pit to end?
I shall never know.

The comfort I find beneath my feet,
The denial of the sinking sand.

Stability in my ignorance,
Not wanting anything to change, but it must.

I stand alone in my pool of ignorance,
As do you in yours.

Continually painting this beautiful portrait for ourselves,
Of a world that will never be.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Portrait of Ignorance, Beauty Bestowed

Hold me back, pull me down,
Away from this dangerous place I’ve come to love.

The fear, the hurt,
Too comfortable of a feeling.

How is this black pit to end?
I shall never know.

The comfort I find beneath my feet,
The denial of the sinking sand.

Stability in my ignorance,
Not wanting anything to change, but it must.

I stand alone in my pool of ignorance,
As do you in yours.

Continually painting this beautiful portrait for ourselves,
Of a world that will never be.

It's very deep and I find myself reading it over and over again. I think it's very good. Good job.

Hard for some to get. It is far deeper than the words. You have to read between the lines. I think it was great and relatable keep writting it is a good way to release emotions. You got talent keep going.

qyes it's good

i think that the there is not much rhythm but you don't always need it in a poem and i could get what yo were saying i thing that this is a very good poem and that you should keep on writing i because witting is what you feel and there are no guide lines for that.

Yes it is good.
You need to perhaps work on some bits, make it sound a little less teen angst, but other then that it is beautiful.

can you help me with mine please?
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I've read it a million times; very cliche. No I did not like it.

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NICE