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Position:Home>Poetry> Poetry Title do you like the TITLE NOT POEM lol :)?Question:I am trying to think of a title for the following poem (btw i am NOT a poet, and i know this sucks. no worries i already know that don't tell me. OK here is the poem and ignore the weird placement of the words it looks like a fish when i did it in word) I was just going to do Elimination but now I don't know, any feedback or better titles? Slicing through the water, a fish darts about, slowly eliminating potentially dangerous routes until, finally, a path is chosen. Though seemingly benign, the threats that lay ahead might just as well be this way as the next. However, a thought such as this not anticipated by a simple fish, the scaly body safely moves on, unharmed by human imagination, yet safe. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I am trying to think of a title for the following poem (btw i am NOT a poet, and i know this sucks. no worries i already know that don't tell me. OK here is the poem and ignore the weird placement of the words it looks like a fish when i did it in word) I was just going to do Elimination but now I don't know, any feedback or better titles? Slicing through the water, a fish darts about, slowly eliminating potentially dangerous routes until, finally, a path is chosen. Though seemingly benign, the threats that lay ahead might just as well be this way as the next. However, a thought such as this not anticipated by a simple fish, the scaly body safely moves on, unharmed by human imagination, yet safe. "The Journey ahead", "A Fish's way" just some possible suggestions -_- thats a good title! or Pathfinder would be cool Unique poem. :) Elimination is good. Carelessly Careful don't know about a tittle but i love the poem! Elimination has connotations towards feces. LoL I'd say... "risky fish" I like carelessly careful An oxymoron would b really good Fantastic! Another day goes by the fish in the water dreaming imagination into the heart of the fish fish: natures beautifier just a couple that come to mind after reading your poem.... dont dis urself! thats a great poem Oblivious Great poem |