This verse is percolating, where do you think the next should go?

Question:I want to look upon you naked again
I want you to trust me to see your desire
I want to capture that which we had
In darkness
And in light
To fuel and reignite
The smoldering remains
(So fondly remembered)
Of our heated fire.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I want to look upon you naked again
I want you to trust me to see your desire
I want to capture that which we had
In darkness
And in light
To fuel and reignite
The smoldering remains
(So fondly remembered)
Of our heated fire.

This is powerful as is. It leaves room for one's own questions to come into play. Like a separate thought or background noise.

And burn all those old tapes you lent me before you ran off with Carlos the Snake.

Seriously though, don't you think it's a little cheesy...?

Let the burning passion lead us
Close your eyes
As I take the lead
Gently touching
Your most sensitive spots
Teasing, Stimulating, Arousing
As you moan
And grab begging me to stop
While you scream for more

This flame continues to burn
Wishing to consume all oxygen
Longing for memories to be relived
The desire for flesh
Feel your warm smoky breath
on my neck again
As the ambers and ash harmonise

Passion rekindled, to me, is hard to express. I would be inclined to leave it as is, a vague but reflective wish.

on the screeen

I like it as is. My imagination then comes into play, asking what comes next? I reflect and answer. But knowing you, you will create a bang up answer that will blow me away!

really good poem and i get the type, meaning and lyrics of it. did you make it up? only the rythm needs to be fixed.

The next should go...in the hot tub!

I'll go with the hot tub idea.
Percolate on!

My own experience has been that "There's nothing as cold as ashes after the flame goes out." But if the fire still smolders, maybe you will fare better.