I have a new poem (i still miss you)?

Question:“I Still Miss You”
Brittany Evanko

For months I never thought twice on what you thought of me.
I didn’t know how much of a match our hearts would be.
I refuse to get hurt again, like I have many times in the past.
I can’t help but thinking when I am with you, the time passes so fast.

Seeing the light shimmer in the bright sun, I think of old times we had.
Some of them were the happiest of my life, others simply make me sad.
Can I learn to trust you again; after all you have done in past years?
There were some times that I will never forget, with endless rivers of tears.

There is only so much time until you will be forced to leave.
Anyone’s love can make it through, as long as they believe.
The Army is something that can make you proud,
Never have I been as proud to say something aloud.

Serving your country is never something to be ashamed of.
If it were anything to keep you growing day to day, it would be love.
As for today, I don’t know where we will go or what will unfold.
The things that I need to know are all in your hands to behold.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: “I Still Miss You”
Brittany Evanko

For months I never thought twice on what you thought of me.
I didn’t know how much of a match our hearts would be.
I refuse to get hurt again, like I have many times in the past.
I can’t help but thinking when I am with you, the time passes so fast.

Seeing the light shimmer in the bright sun, I think of old times we had.
Some of them were the happiest of my life, others simply make me sad.
Can I learn to trust you again; after all you have done in past years?
There were some times that I will never forget, with endless rivers of tears.

There is only so much time until you will be forced to leave.
Anyone’s love can make it through, as long as they believe.
The Army is something that can make you proud,
Never have I been as proud to say something aloud.

Serving your country is never something to be ashamed of.
If it were anything to keep you growing day to day, it would be love.
As for today, I don’t know where we will go or what will unfold.
The things that I need to know are all in your hands to behold.

I like the context of your poem, but I think you emphasize so much on the rhyme that you forget the rhythm. Your lines need to flow smoothly. It's not bad, I just think if you work on it, you'll be able to make it flow better. Is this your question?