Rate my little poem?

Question:It took me literally 1 minute.

An apple just hit me,
it fell from a tree,
the idea just struck me,
id call it gravity,
a guy name Issac Newton sat on this grass,
picking up fallen apples,
and scratching his ***.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It took me literally 1 minute.

An apple just hit me,
it fell from a tree,
the idea just struck me,
id call it gravity,
a guy name Issac Newton sat on this grass,
picking up fallen apples,
and scratching his ***.

10, lol. The funniest poem i'v read on yahoo =]

haha, i get it, that's totally funny , i like it

10/10

Ha! Clever and hilarious, in a quiet sort of way.
9/10, because I don't believe in perfect scores.

I like it a lot! It's really funny! And you could rap it. Though please check your spelling and grammar :)

hahaha funny 10101010101010101010010101010

nice give me your ten points just for asking for them

And people wonder why I don't post my work at Y!A.

I'd give it a 3.

The meter wanders, the rhymes are simplistic, the narrative is stale, and it's a perfect example of folks believing anything that rhymes MUST be a poem