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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of my lyrics/poem?Question:Okay, I'm kind of hesitant about asking this because I don't want anyone to steal my work, so I won't put the whole thing. Tell me what you think!<3 Three months from now I'll be sitting here writing about how I should have told you about the way you brighten up my world but you will never know because I don't want a show and I just can't can't seem to make it happen you turn me upside down and you're waiting for an answer that you will never know just cause I didn't want a show (goes on with more of that...then here's the ending) All along I've known All along I've known that three months from now I would be writing Three months from now I will be deciding Three months from now and I will be hiding from what I always knew Three months and it'll be true. Just watch it all come true. The beat is kind of similar to that of Boys Like Girls' "Heels over Head" in the beginning, to give you a better idea. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Okay, I'm kind of hesitant about asking this because I don't want anyone to steal my work, so I won't put the whole thing. Tell me what you think!<3 Three months from now I'll be sitting here writing about how I should have told you about the way you brighten up my world but you will never know because I don't want a show and I just can't can't seem to make it happen you turn me upside down and you're waiting for an answer that you will never know just cause I didn't want a show (goes on with more of that...then here's the ending) All along I've known All along I've known that three months from now I would be writing Three months from now I will be deciding Three months from now and I will be hiding from what I always knew Three months and it'll be true. Just watch it all come true. The beat is kind of similar to that of Boys Like Girls' "Heels over Head" in the beginning, to give you a better idea. I love it! I agree that maybe more talk of the emotions you feel and things like that. You might have that in the parts you left out. Although I actually kind of like the matter of factness of it.That was really smart not posting the whole thing too. Yeah, I like it alot! very very nice that is really good If you get the right beat I think it could be a cool song, but you just repeat the same thing over and over, try to describe more about the feelings, because it just says that in 3 monthes something will happen. It could be good, but if you add more differenciated words more people will like it and it will have a bigger meaning. I thinkk it is great! You are really good and I don't blame you for not posting the whole thing! I wouldn't do it either! I enjoyed reading it! I hope I helped! :D |