Another poem for ya'll Critic are welcome. Do u like it.?

Question:"empty regret"

Somewhere near not where we are,
I heard one single sound.
A flame of bitterness and hate,
my warmth till my last day.

My candle burns at both the ends,
one less flame awaits the dawn.
Living in what has been said,
I feel so cold and dead.

Sitting on the edge of time,
a shell full of regret.
The remains of my soul,
anger, a crimson flow.

Knowing my life was wasted,
be honest won't you please.
I take badk the wastes thats mine,
just claim all of your own.

Hang on to this hellish pain,
a token of our hate.
A sin, a blade to pierce my skin,
the bloods what I regret.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "empty regret"

Somewhere near not where we are,
I heard one single sound.
A flame of bitterness and hate,
my warmth till my last day.

My candle burns at both the ends,
one less flame awaits the dawn.
Living in what has been said,
I feel so cold and dead.

Sitting on the edge of time,
a shell full of regret.
The remains of my soul,
anger, a crimson flow.

Knowing my life was wasted,
be honest won't you please.
I take badk the wastes thats mine,
just claim all of your own.

Hang on to this hellish pain,
a token of our hate.
A sin, a blade to pierce my skin,
the bloods what I regret.

That was good. =]
Im sure lots of people will like this one, just because of how expressive it is.Keep up the good work.

I think it's pretty good.
I would change the first line though.
Nice:)