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Question:Please do not
Follow my lead
Move to your own beat
I fear my rythm is not meant for you
Though we move gracefully
It seems my Tango
Is not fit for your Waltz
Let us remain on the dance floor
Apart but together
We shall dance a new dance
Maybe a Wango


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Please do not
Follow my lead
Move to your own beat
I fear my rythm is not meant for you
Though we move gracefully
It seems my Tango
Is not fit for your Waltz
Let us remain on the dance floor
Apart but together
We shall dance a new dance
Maybe a Wango

Your concept inspired me to write... I wrote this piece for you.

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"apart but together, we shall dance a new dance"


Temari

Way pass poetic license with this, in fact we may have to review your license. But we will wait until your dance is done, maybe 40 years from now. Now your penance is too walk up to a complete stranger, preferably a woman, and tell her you want to wango. Report back tomorrow in poetic form the results.

I like this.

Very nice, so many elements, I don't want to be a leader, dance to your own dummer, There is nothing wrong with being different, not everyone is everyones cup of tea but they are someones, there doesn't have to be a winner, and my favorite, lets agree to disagree!!! I like it. :) May I copy this and print to frame? I like haveing positive things around my house and I think this fits perfect.

Dang! No more Julianne Hough...the most adorable girl since Bernadette Peters...

Now this is intoxicating in its imagery. The speaker is obviously very passionate, and while the waltz is beautiful, it does not have the passion, the seduction of the tango. I see a beautiful meld of dances, perhaps not called a "wango", but where the beautiful calm of rhythm tames the passionate, wild fury and where the fury ignites the waves into a pleasant, tumultuous (in a good way) storm. Oh, such vivid imagery.

One minute you are using a crutch and now you're dancin?'
By the way, "rhythm" has two aitches. Both are silent, like the "P" in toilet. And stop playing with your wango.

If you can find a women willing to "Wango" with you, then you have found Love.
The first few steps of learning any new dance are always the most difficult. Don't look down at her feet, but into her eyes and let the music guide you.