Good Aftermorning, Care to Comment?

Question:......................Pleasure
............Delightful, Welcomed
.......Inviting, Uplifting, Rewarding
Wanted, Climax, Release, Enjoyable
.......Straining, Teasing, Pushing
..............Pressure, Tolerance
.............................Pain

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ......................Pleasure
............Delightful, Welcomed
.......Inviting, Uplifting, Rewarding
Wanted, Climax, Release, Enjoyable
.......Straining, Teasing, Pushing
..............Pressure, Tolerance
.............................Pain

See, now this is a lot of words, but it tells a story, and I'm certain others can see it as well.

A relationship
beginning in
pleasure,
ending in
pain,
but the in
between,
I'm certain,
made the both
of them
better for it.

Did I come slightly close? As ever, I love your poems, they constantly strike me in new ways.

love it

delightful?

might go for a song! nice piece.

What about the other cuts:

Bagette:

................Bracketed Brilliance
Clear/White Glimmering Carbon Crystals
.....Kimberlite Pipes Carry Fortunes To
............Places DeBeers Can Mine

Ta Dah!

My only comment: I love it!

Good evenoon!

After getting schooled by Temari this morning I had to withdraw my diamante imitation less I risk ridicule. Your's I'll keep by the bedside.

>>>>>Meaningless
>>>Series>>Of>>Words
>Vaguely>Related>To>Sex
An>Apparent>Yeast>Infection
>>But>Tastefully>Arranged
>>>>In>>A>>Diamond
>>>>>>>Shape

Ya know it wouldn't kill ya to throw in a verb every now and then. Or is this how you talk when your doing it? And what's with that final "P?" P belongs in the bowl. What sup wit' youse guys?

I understand the concept, and the forms good. But I honestly wish people would quit being so modern, and go back to the older, more natural style.

So It's good for what you were going for, but I honestly don't care for it.