Me. what do you think of these words??

Question:This is as close as you`ll see the real me, but this is only a small look.

In the corner I hide, away from prying eyes.
In a room full of space, scared to see my own face.
Not wanting to be part of any race, nor any chase.
Wanting to find peace, scared to be so clouded.
My emptyness, to be so crowed.
In the world I am, given up by man.
Never to be seen, before my heart is clean.
The things I see.
Wanting to be strong, with out it being wrong.
A face in the crowd.
Some one to smile at, some one to believe in.
Can I be a person like that.
Is the rest of my breath, to be this hard.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is as close as you`ll see the real me, but this is only a small look.

In the corner I hide, away from prying eyes.
In a room full of space, scared to see my own face.
Not wanting to be part of any race, nor any chase.
Wanting to find peace, scared to be so clouded.
My emptyness, to be so crowed.
In the world I am, given up by man.
Never to be seen, before my heart is clean.
The things I see.
Wanting to be strong, with out it being wrong.
A face in the crowd.
Some one to smile at, some one to believe in.
Can I be a person like that.
Is the rest of my breath, to be this hard.

Very descriptive and touching.

But what does "My emptyness, to be so crowed." mean?

(and it's spelled emptiness)

i enjoyed it very much. thank you for sharing something so deep

For me it's a little too self centred . Maybe try to intertwine another person / a separate idea into your poem , I think it would make it better