Silence 26-11-06. Who has anything in common with these below.?

Question:To hard to breath, to hard to see.
The world around, changing me.
Setting me free, I`ll have to wait and see.
From young to old.
Not always, able to be bold.
As a child, shrinking away from the hand.
Always being told.
Scared to ask, scared of becoming old.

Short yes, but does it hit a cord, so to speak.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: To hard to breath, to hard to see.
The world around, changing me.
Setting me free, I`ll have to wait and see.
From young to old.
Not always, able to be bold.
As a child, shrinking away from the hand.
Always being told.
Scared to ask, scared of becoming old.

Short yes, but does it hit a cord, so to speak.

The bell tolls for the first, second and third lines. The rest are a little blurry...
"What to do as a child,
i was always told,
but was scared to ask
for i was not bold."
~*WinglessAngel*~

nothing relates to me except that 11-26-06 would be when i turned 16...lol

It's good, I like it. But I think you should get rid of the comma between "always" and "able". I definitely have something in common with the last line, "scared of becoming old."