So i was bored and found some of my old dark poems?

Question:they suck i know but what the hell im bored so let me know watcha think
the frist one is called "Dreaming On The Agony Cliffs"

Resting above the agony cliffs
admiring the red waters below
moving so sweet and swift
Waves of flames lined in rows
dreaming of something
other then nothing
other then i have

"Death's Ride"
Laying in puddles of blood
feeling what no-one should
cant see the silver lining in the clouds
all alone in the peoples crowds
smiles is what she showed
but it was happiness she loathed
her bleeding heart filled her inside
and now shes on deaths ride

"Midnight Arising"
Wolves baying at the sky in the night
in the wind with the moon in sight
innocent blood spilling to the floor
and the crows of death beggining to soar

the flames of hell will arise
the heavens will fall from the skies
demons will feed on the weak
because power is all they seek

this is the midnight arising.......

well thats all for now
-Dani Valentine

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: they suck i know but what the hell im bored so let me know watcha think
the frist one is called "Dreaming On The Agony Cliffs"

Resting above the agony cliffs
admiring the red waters below
moving so sweet and swift
Waves of flames lined in rows
dreaming of something
other then nothing
other then i have

"Death's Ride"
Laying in puddles of blood
feeling what no-one should
cant see the silver lining in the clouds
all alone in the peoples crowds
smiles is what she showed
but it was happiness she loathed
her bleeding heart filled her inside
and now shes on deaths ride

"Midnight Arising"
Wolves baying at the sky in the night
in the wind with the moon in sight
innocent blood spilling to the floor
and the crows of death beggining to soar

the flames of hell will arise
the heavens will fall from the skies
demons will feed on the weak
because power is all they seek

this is the midnight arising.......

well thats all for now
-Dani Valentine

ay hoe if i like them then everyone likes them.
got it?
good.
lol jk.
nooooooo i love them and you know it.

-Sheepy?

I like them

You kind of ruined it with "They suck, I know."
If you don't think they're good, no one will.

I think their good. My favorites are "Dreaming On The Agony Cliffs" and "Death's Ride".

are you kidding me? those are awesome. they're dark. Usually I hate poetry but this is really good. Scary good, and i don't mean that literally. you should keep writing.

i think they are very artist I read a sense of violence that is goes on threw out the world

I enjoyed reading them

Have more confidence in you're writing
They're better than half of the c*** that gets posted here

They don't suck at all. They could be fleshed out and maybe updated...but these are very intereting. I only write dark poetry, so check out some of mine. I like this and would not mind seeing some more.