Please please rate my poem about super powers?

Question:what do you think about it?

Supers Powers?!

If you could have a super power,
what would it be?
would you choose flight, ultra strength or flexibility?
If you had this gift what would you choose to be?
the hero of the day or keep it to secrecy?

If you really had the choice of this fantasy,
would you choose time travel, ultra speed or invisibility?
If you had this gift what would you choose to be?
the best person on the earth of all humanity?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: what do you think about it?

Supers Powers?!

If you could have a super power,
what would it be?
would you choose flight, ultra strength or flexibility?
If you had this gift what would you choose to be?
the hero of the day or keep it to secrecy?

If you really had the choice of this fantasy,
would you choose time travel, ultra speed or invisibility?
If you had this gift what would you choose to be?
the best person on the earth of all humanity?

Andy D
While reading your poem of super powers
I am thinking of the super hero's
Like superman who flies
wonder woman ultra strength
Batman the crime fighter
This is a wonderful poem.
I would find it hard to decide the hero
however.

Yes I did enjoy this poem
I thought it was fun.

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its ok, very nice

i dont like the last two lines. the rest i like quite well

not too bad...but sounds more like an song or something. but not too bad. a good start though. if i had one...it might be flight,speed,witchy gifts. haha...im more into that stuff than stupid superman and batman put together.

Not bad! I think, since your poem focuses on rhyme, you need to focus on the rhythm also. Read it aloud and see if the lines are balanced.

Other than that, I think it is pretty nice. A little revision would make it perfect. Keep up the good work!