Could you please?

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Sometimes it rains
Sometimes it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I’m feeling so blue
You cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can’t stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
my life is so bland
I wish we could be
But I cant change who I am.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: vote for this poem in a poetry contest?

http://poetry.com/publications/display.a...

Sometimes it rains
Sometimes it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I’m feeling so blue
You cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can’t stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
my life is so bland
I wish we could be
But I cant change who I am.

I hate to be the one...this is called Vanity Publishing. Everybody wins...as long as you pay $60 for the book. TD

Not bad man I couldn't write something like that. On a scale from 1-10 I say 7. Nice job bro, nice job

maybe 8 or 9 its pretty good. :)