This one's a series, do you think it's cool?

Question:The first one was
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This one's part two.

I Fade Far So As Roses Fade

Do despairing souls feature retribution from depressing together by durations set before night? Do you lie to sleep? From tire? No. Wrong. You awake in dark. Desire free of all restrictions, determined delicious dissent in infectious dream. Flight, emptiness, an eternity, end me in ever, far rosy fade.

Aggregate stars, more far fed gestating souls in frustration, vegetation degenerating from creation sliding in less formed night, we, us, our, grace. Grails fated like aspirations in a mesa filling at repression gallows, gods fiddles, hers, just slaughter, us. Cigarette packs fade in degrees, far so as roses do.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The first one was
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

This one's part two.

I Fade Far So As Roses Fade

Do despairing souls feature retribution from depressing together by durations set before night? Do you lie to sleep? From tire? No. Wrong. You awake in dark. Desire free of all restrictions, determined delicious dissent in infectious dream. Flight, emptiness, an eternity, end me in ever, far rosy fade.

Aggregate stars, more far fed gestating souls in frustration, vegetation degenerating from creation sliding in less formed night, we, us, our, grace. Grails fated like aspirations in a mesa filling at repression gallows, gods fiddles, hers, just slaughter, us. Cigarette packs fade in degrees, far so as roses do.

Hmmmm...I think this is yummy. The third stanza is a cloud, shifting with every waive of the hand. Very nice. TD

I think it's creative.