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Question:Roses and Champagne
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

I don't have words to describe
What being stranded on Mars is like.
Every writer just wants someone
Even one to appreciate what they write.

There's no artist that can ever draw
A picture so beautiful as your sketch.
Like a spider, I couldn't be happier
Than when caught inside a tangled web.

What you've done was inspire us all,
And place our voices in the air.
Working diligently and long,
So the book would have right amount of flair!

So I wrote you this sappy ode,
To try and find the words to speak.
You put something so far away from me,
Right into my line of reach!

Like roses and champagne.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Roses and Champagne
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

I don't have words to describe
What being stranded on Mars is like.
Every writer just wants someone
Even one to appreciate what they write.

There's no artist that can ever draw
A picture so beautiful as your sketch.
Like a spider, I couldn't be happier
Than when caught inside a tangled web.

What you've done was inspire us all,
And place our voices in the air.
Working diligently and long,
So the book would have right amount of flair!

So I wrote you this sappy ode,
To try and find the words to speak.
You put something so far away from me,
Right into my line of reach!

Like roses and champagne.

I hope we do it 20 more times....and do it long after I am gone...your voices made the story. I just assembled it. TD

YAAAAY! Standing ovation! I have utmost respect for "sappy" men.

This is wonderful, Semper Fi. It expresses the feelings in all our hearts. Elysabeth and TD have made many dreams come true.

Champagne!

I haven't gotten to your work in the tangled web yet, but I'm looking forward to it.

I echo your sentiments toward TD and Elyslund

The Marines have landed. "ON MARS"? Champagne all
around. You guys are great. CONGRATULATIONS.

It's a beautiful ode, Semper. TD and Elysabeth are certainly worth it. They did so much for us.

It is a wonderful tribute.

a star for u for the poem and being td friend