Would you read part three again... it was reported, will you still read?

Question:Forgotten name Part III

As the demons broke all barings
A memory began to play
The sting returning to her scaring
Of a lost, forgotten day
A time when her and maidens holy
While braiding locks would watch the dear
A secret held to Siren only
To rip her heart alone in fear
But soon as past would part its meaning
She closed her eyes and drew away
No longer would she muse in heeding
But the world, for her pain, slay
Again the song rose in reproving
Telling her to halt her spell
But she cried, her stance unmoving,
“Away from me to depths of Hell!”
This only adding to her hatred
She threw her soul into the blaze
Disowning all she once held sacred
Her mind swept up in wicked craze
Out from stone with fowl intention
To lose her scorn back on the globe
No fear of judgment or Retention
For she had nothing left to hold

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Forgotten name Part III

As the demons broke all barings
A memory began to play
The sting returning to her scaring
Of a lost, forgotten day
A time when her and maidens holy
While braiding locks would watch the dear
A secret held to Siren only
To rip her heart alone in fear
But soon as past would part its meaning
She closed her eyes and drew away
No longer would she muse in heeding
But the world, for her pain, slay
Again the song rose in reproving
Telling her to halt her spell
But she cried, her stance unmoving,
“Away from me to depths of Hell!”
This only adding to her hatred
She threw her soul into the blaze
Disowning all she once held sacred
Her mind swept up in wicked craze
Out from stone with fowl intention
To lose her scorn back on the globe
No fear of judgment or Retention
For she had nothing left to hold

Eva hovered over,
her wraithly face all wreathed in shock,
her hell-bent lover killing life,
and turning heart into a rock.

She wept for all the world to see
drowning the Siren witch in rain,
the trunks of trees began to bleed,
to scream out darling Eva's pain.

The spell could not
be ended, broken
so Eva bade
farwell, ashoken.

ok i read it, now what? i don't understand why it was reported.

I have no idea the point of your post (as I did not see the first 2? I am guessing here)
regardless its pretty good.

I have no idea why this was reported. It's good. A pox on them who did this to you.

I have already said my piece but i know it is not fair to you that i could not remember what it was i said... I like how it follows the other two but delves deeper into the world you have created... keep up on this story and don't let the trolls get to you!

This was good. I began actually reading it as a poem, but as it went along it turned into a well illustrated story. I saw everything happening in my head. Nice one.

IK Hon, and I was so sorely sad when this morning I saw it was gone (crying) seriously, it's such BS the Muther feckers have to feck wit us all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jealousy's a ****** and more..............

http://www.nabble.com/%E2%99%AAWriters-U...

Won't be banned there my friend *^_^*

Loves ya and I'll be watchin' out fer more from you, damn fine work @)~>~

I can't see any reason at all for this to be reported. It's a beautiful poem in form, meter and imagery. One small edit: you need to say "foul" rather than "fowl."

Nobody in their right mind would report this fascinating and intensely captivating poem! It had to be someone random and spiteful, unless someone was afraid of the sheer power of the poem or extremely jealous.

this is a wonderful story poem...about the dark side of pain..and dispare....about throwing open doors to places most can only dream of...whoever reported you is just way to uptight..... and realy needs a reality check on raw emotions they are not always pretty.... what they are is intence....and you put that so well...... the death of a friend or mentor can bring out much in a person...

Sorry it got booted. Hopefully, it won't happen again.
I have really been enjoying the series and will be saddened when it is over. I'm off to read part IV.

This one rings out from the past life had by Eva and Siren... then the present darkness comes crashing, all to typically, back in and she must push aside those thoughts of what once was... Now, the one thing she once loved is trying to show her that she cannot do this dark thing and she has closed her ears to Evas' call... I am assuming that the song spoken of here and in the last one is Eva... just a guess but your work always has the ability to be translated 1,000 different ways... as should every good poets work.

Another fine piece. Gotta go check out part IV now.