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First Moto
by TD Euwaite

Don’t yank the crank
Or motor will
Combust and
…flywheel fly
Cyclic monumentum
Power on
To overdrive…

The scooper sucks
Loose words up
Bundles them with twine
Package neat, completely
With metaphor and rhyme…

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First Moto
by TD Euwaite

Don’t yank the crank
Or motor will
Combust and
…flywheel fly
Cyclic monumentum
Power on
To overdrive…

The scooper sucks
Loose words up
Bundles them with twine
Package neat, completely
With metaphor and rhyme…

*****

Reminds me of the old camp song...Oh, once there was a
Dutchman, his name was Johnarebeck..

Well, we all knew you were a poem-writing machine, but this takes it to a whole new level.

Very efficient.

So the crank is coffee or just no sleep so you have fresh material each day?

Errrrr,,,,,,,,,, Maybe Not !!

Seems to me you have bundled them up quite nicely ,,,,,,,Nice Rhythm

Where, oh, where has my little dog gone......
All tied up in a bow, stamp on his butt,
He's howlin' far, far away!!!!

It's a Good Morning!

Plug n play?

I guess it's really not as hard as some make it. Let it flow.