This is slightly R rated. How do u like it.?

Question:"deeper"

You take me to places,
that I never dreamed.
Exploring my desires,
the darkest kind of sin.

To levels that i thought,
I would never even see.
To the darker side my love,
I'm yours and yours alone.

You introduced to bondage,
and pain just for some fun.
I fantasize everytime,
I think of that first day.

I trust in you my love,
never minding that I bled.
Patiently you explained,
every word you said.

Deeper now we've delved,
the darkside of our love.
I love it all, everything,
like Heaven up above.

You reached down,
and stroked my heart.
Never will our love,
will never ever part.

I trust you with my life,
my entiore being dear.
When you took my hand,
nothing I had to fear.

As we now progress,
to the next new step.
The secrets that we keep,
I have always kept.

I've spent all my life,
looking just for you.
Now I have you my love,
we've so much more to do.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "deeper"

You take me to places,
that I never dreamed.
Exploring my desires,
the darkest kind of sin.

To levels that i thought,
I would never even see.
To the darker side my love,
I'm yours and yours alone.

You introduced to bondage,
and pain just for some fun.
I fantasize everytime,
I think of that first day.

I trust in you my love,
never minding that I bled.
Patiently you explained,
every word you said.

Deeper now we've delved,
the darkside of our love.
I love it all, everything,
like Heaven up above.

You reached down,
and stroked my heart.
Never will our love,
will never ever part.

I trust you with my life,
my entiore being dear.
When you took my hand,
nothing I had to fear.

As we now progress,
to the next new step.
The secrets that we keep,
I have always kept.

I've spent all my life,
looking just for you.
Now I have you my love,
we've so much more to do.

I like what you are trying to say, but maybe condensing and some different word choices. This will be a keeper though.

awww that is so cute!

Wow! I think it's creative and I enjoy it ;)

very good.

I think it's a nice poem.
Nice work:)

Reading this got me all tied up in knots. You just can't be beaten. Did it take you long to whip this into shape, or is this just off the cuffs?