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Question:First feeling funny
I inquired instantly
Rapidly requiring response
Entering euphouric enthusiasm
Waiting while wanting
Openly optimistic
Remebering, realizing, refraining
Knowing
Sensations shall soon soar


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: First feeling funny
I inquired instantly
Rapidly requiring response
Entering euphouric enthusiasm
Waiting while wanting
Openly optimistic
Remebering, realizing, refraining
Knowing
Sensations shall soon soar

Momentum building
Openness
Riveting, revealing
Enlightening

Faiths fuel
Imaginations ignite
Rehabilitated
Emptiness
Wanton lust
Once oppressed
Released slowly
Knowingly…
She waits


Temari

Oddly enough, I hated firing workers and regarded it as a failure of managment.
It certainly never brought feelings of joy.

Nice job on the acrostic though.
I like that you carried the initial letter across each line.

Too bad the first answerer didn't "get it." I could relate right away and immediately took me back to some of my favorite displays. You clearly have a knack for the acrostic form.

My only problem is the "I inquired instantly" line. What were you asking? Perhaps you should find a different verb that begins with an "I."

All in all? Good job!

Kabum

Fireworks without sparks?
It doesn't have much merit.
Zero points I'll get for this
Zinging gets no credit.
Lest I leave you in the dark
Each time I rhyme, you'll have to grin and bear it.

Knockwurst, kale, ketchup, etc.... what you getting tired and only one word? The fuse must have been a short one. An alliterative acrostic amazement!