The windy clay road?

Question:The windy clay road

The parting breaths
The mistrals
Through the forest
Dead leaves settle
Wolves of grey
Sense whiff of
Decaying prey

Gazing Down
Decimating rivers
Neath the clouds
So high
The air is chill
A castle sits
Prince remits
Tales of loneliness
And love

But
The windy clay road
That shakes akin
Possessing soul
Wept more
For
In ten years now
Nobody tramped
This blind alley

But hold!
A cheer prevalent
Prince's Love
Descended
And today
The windy clay road
Weeps
Forever more

Day of laughter
Passed
Nights of lust
The old clock chimed
The windy clay road
Smiled

Their kisses met
The old clock chimed
On the twelfth hour
The mask fell

Rejoice
Nevermore
Will the windy clay road
Weep
For the Prince will forever
Walk its blind alley

Thoughts , critique , comments ? Thanks for reading

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The windy clay road

The parting breaths
The mistrals
Through the forest
Dead leaves settle
Wolves of grey
Sense whiff of
Decaying prey

Gazing Down
Decimating rivers
Neath the clouds
So high
The air is chill
A castle sits
Prince remits
Tales of loneliness
And love

But
The windy clay road
That shakes akin
Possessing soul
Wept more
For
In ten years now
Nobody tramped
This blind alley

But hold!
A cheer prevalent
Prince's Love
Descended
And today
The windy clay road
Weeps
Forever more

Day of laughter
Passed
Nights of lust
The old clock chimed
The windy clay road
Smiled

Their kisses met
The old clock chimed
On the twelfth hour
The mask fell

Rejoice
Nevermore
Will the windy clay road
Weep
For the Prince will forever
Walk its blind alley

Thoughts , critique , comments ? Thanks for reading

wow,this is good, i would not change a thing, this is very good you have more ?
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what you on?
"will the wind clay road weep"
say that out loud and tell me it's poetic.

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