Good or Bad poem?

Question:What can I do to earn back your trust
I know it was wrong
But I would of known you would do this to yourself
I wouldnt of done it
I didnt though my life would be different
when I heard it
All I felt was scared to ask are you okey
I didnt even know what to do
when I heard this my phone drop
cant believe what happen
when I heard your at the hospital in a coma
All wanted to know when is she going to wake up
their was no answer
My tear just drop and drop
If i can change the pass i would tell you how much i love you
and the one i love
But it is to late when I found out
Hurting you was the last thing I want to do
I didnt know you would do this to yourself
and if you were here
I would tell you how much you mean to me
And how sorry I am
seeing you like this is kiling me
Everyday I am at the hospital waiting for you to wake up
And tell you I am sorry
And I would never ever do it again
And tell you I would love you forever
All I want is to see you waking up with a smile
I dont care how many year I need wait
Along I can get to see that smile
Money isnt the problem because it wont last forever
But my feeling for you now will last until I die

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What can I do to earn back your trust
I know it was wrong
But I would of known you would do this to yourself
I wouldnt of done it
I didnt though my life would be different
when I heard it
All I felt was scared to ask are you okey
I didnt even know what to do
when I heard this my phone drop
cant believe what happen
when I heard your at the hospital in a coma
All wanted to know when is she going to wake up
their was no answer
My tear just drop and drop
If i can change the pass i would tell you how much i love you
and the one i love
But it is to late when I found out
Hurting you was the last thing I want to do
I didnt know you would do this to yourself
and if you were here
I would tell you how much you mean to me
And how sorry I am
seeing you like this is kiling me
Everyday I am at the hospital waiting for you to wake up
And tell you I am sorry
And I would never ever do it again
And tell you I would love you forever
All I want is to see you waking up with a smile
I dont care how many year I need wait
Along I can get to see that smile
Money isnt the problem because it wont last forever
But my feeling for you now will last until I die

Good, good but, I would suggest a few more "powerful" word usage, never be afraid to experiment with your word choices my friend *^_^* Either then that, I like it lots <3

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! not the best poem ive ever read but #4

It sounds heart-felt
but still be open to revising it as new and interesting ideas pop u

thas deep man. good poem don't tweak too much.

Sometimes I wonder what is wrong with some people that love every single poem posted on here. Sorry but this is not "good" . It's not even a poem . More like a narration of sorts. Don't take offence but this is what I think . That doesn't mean you should stop writing though . Also try to fix the spelling errors.