My poem called love equals hate. what do you think.?

Question:Why did i not try to get away
When we were fighting everyday
Why did i let you beat me everyday
and then say oh it was ok.

The last days i remember well' how much i hated you ' and thinking could he even tell.
When i kept the gun that night was because of you and our 4'999fight. I felt in my heart i was going to shoot you
from the start.' You worthless piece of Crap.
I went over it 100 times in and out my head ' and i told my lover if he hits me again' he;ll be sliced up and dead.
I hated you now and i hated you then and if i seen your ugly face i would slaughter you again.
I'm doing 10 now on a 20 year stretch and getting rid of you was all of the best.I now have a cell 6 by 6 and if i could have a chance to do it again i would hold my stance. FIN

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Why did i not try to get away
When we were fighting everyday
Why did i let you beat me everyday
and then say oh it was ok.

The last days i remember well' how much i hated you ' and thinking could he even tell.
When i kept the gun that night was because of you and our 4'999fight. I felt in my heart i was going to shoot you
from the start.' You worthless piece of Crap.
I went over it 100 times in and out my head ' and i told my lover if he hits me again' he;ll be sliced up and dead.
I hated you now and i hated you then and if i seen your ugly face i would slaughter you again.
I'm doing 10 now on a 20 year stretch and getting rid of you was all of the best.I now have a cell 6 by 6 and if i could have a chance to do it again i would hold my stance. FIN

I like the honesty in the emotion that somebody feels after being scorned.

It really makes me think of "chicago"

the movie.

um, if this is serious im locking mself in my bedroom(jk)

its umm.. different...

well its more like a story than a poem. actually kinda creeps me out. but if thats the kind of poetry ur into, i guess that's ok.

great job