Redo...no typos left behind...at least making an effort...do you like it?

Question:*****
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by TD Euwaite

I tired of walking
Then jumped on the back
… of something
It did not agree

I tried the next thing
It looked like a horse, to me
But still, I am walking

The next beast that I rode
Turned and wanted to gore me
So I ran a little while

Then, there was a goat
I thought perhaps could hold me,
But no, I shouldn’t have tried

I don’t want to walk
There’s a human in bondage
Perhaps, I can ride

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Load Bearing Member
by TD Euwaite

I tired of walking
Then jumped on the back
… of something
It did not agree

I tried the next thing
It looked like a horse, to me
But still, I am walking

The next beast that I rode
Turned and wanted to gore me
So I ran a little while

Then, there was a goat
I thought perhaps could hold me,
But no, I shouldn’t have tried

I don’t want to walk
There’s a human in bondage
Perhaps, I can ride

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Either I am very perceptive or I just have a dirty mind.
Should I be blushing?

It's wonderful TD......just wonderful.....the dimensions of your thoughts are simply immeasurable!

I love it! Especially the last stanza, it made me think of someone & smile:)

Funny , unique and always well written . Very nice

Where's my coffee? And don't send it by UPS!!!!

Ought to write a poem about how everyone is so impressed by the book!!!!!!! WOW!!!

The ride of choice? Perhaps the first stanza holds the clue? Well done.

I really like this one.

You played around well with your breaks. Last stanza is excellent.

Nicely done.

This was totally aw some. Breathtaking.

great I love how it flows

Wonderful poem
I can see that you are
having problems
dealing with animals that
don't agree with you,
while on your walk.
The first thing was a horse
you are still walking of course
The next thing was a beast
still walking maybe going east
you must be tired but there was a goat
it would be safer in a boat.
All that effort is hurting your pride
I hope you can find that ride.

I really liked this one .....It's wonderful

A little deep ................Maybe

Good just the same

Wonderful effort. I like it much better then mine.

TD, you need a nap. Then, you can ride.