Reflection in the wondow, last part. Please coment.?

Question:For now all I can say is, ill do the best I can with this life we share.
And thank you for always being there for me.
That means so much to me, to know that you care.
You mean everything to me, after all, you are my life.

For my readers.
Long poem I know, but I write whats in my head, I can do no less.
I wrote this as me being by the window, with how I was feeling at the time,also I was the other person.
Trying to give comfort, as I would have given it.
But in you are in that state, you could be either person really.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: For now all I can say is, ill do the best I can with this life we share.
And thank you for always being there for me.
That means so much to me, to know that you care.
You mean everything to me, after all, you are my life.

For my readers.
Long poem I know, but I write whats in my head, I can do no less.
I wrote this as me being by the window, with how I was feeling at the time,also I was the other person.
Trying to give comfort, as I would have given it.
But in you are in that state, you could be either person really.

Oh my goodness, that idea was genius. I never would have guessed that you sought refuge to think, and in turn your own 'self' went to console you. It's magnificent, the idea. All are guilty of writing what is in our heads, lol! I think your idea was great. The poem really related to my emotions in some sort of way... my sullen nature, and trying to figure things out in solitude. Nice job. I think you achieved what you wanted to write, if not in grammatics and punctuation, then in ideals and thoughts. Keep up the good work.
~*WinglessAngel*~

Wolfen we all write what is in our head - but, isn't the idea that you communicate with others of some importance?
On a good day the creative juices can really run and it is difficult to retain all, so I would quickly type everything as it came (thank god for the computer) and then later I would start to cut, reassemble, change etc.
I had no one to read my poems to (none of my kids or my husband, or friends for that matter, was the slightest bit interested) so it was up to me to be judgemental. I read other people's poems for ideas and guidance.
Sorry, if this is boring. But, your poems do show promise, and I wished I'd had some-one to advise me when I was a would-be poet.