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Position:Home>Poetry> This one is for my friend Penny. If she would come and read it she would enjoy..Question:***** Patience by TD Euwaite Where is he? That big orange fatty What ravaged Ethel so mercilessly a fortnight ago… Fat Leon, thinks he’s a lion, this one Many a mouse’s fate been sealed With his morning meal That dustbroom tail swishing And him wishing for a mouthful of Mouse fooled I smell him Canned fishes and his wishes done For fun, he hunts us little ones Here I wait, not cat bait am I I not get et I be The smart mouse… ***** Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ***** Patience by TD Euwaite Where is he? That big orange fatty What ravaged Ethel so mercilessly a fortnight ago… Fat Leon, thinks he’s a lion, this one Many a mouse’s fate been sealed With his morning meal That dustbroom tail swishing And him wishing for a mouthful of Mouse fooled I smell him Canned fishes and his wishes done For fun, he hunts us little ones Here I wait, not cat bait am I I not get et I be The smart mouse… ***** We always enjoy your words Ta Dah! Fat bottom, fat bottom, dung hampers baby the cat he gottem. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~... Smart mouse in my house quite safe from tearing, ripping, shredding of cat a disgrace this mouse still daaares to tread over the dead asleep stinky and fat with other dead mouses inside it cat whiskers away from his harm today and bad breath tomorrow. The mouse on the pad? Loved the dustbroom tail swishing. You must be full of pep today with your offerings, have you been sharing a can of tuna? I enjoyed it...really neat! The mouse that ate the lion, puddy tat...tail and all!!!! Beware!!! My kind of pohme. Liked it. So did Dickens & Chloe. yes, i like it TDE. I really wish a poem could bring our Penny/s back, don't you? I'd try one myself if i thought it would work, even if it did scare the horses. Mouthful of mouse fooled, canned fishes and wishes and all the other internal rhymes made this a pleasure to read. Pssst . . . Penny may be closer than you think. Heh heh Give us our Penny back. Heeeeeere Kitty. Very well done. It reminds me of a little mouse that has been bothering me this past week. But no fear, this is why they make rat poison and rat baits. GOOD job..............sounds like one of my putty tat's........... That mouse would never escape from Whoopee! Funny poem, with a message. Read the last two parts <backwards of your verse. The whole thing if you like? That means it is really good because it sounds good backwards too. I can only smile. Penny has been officially declared a witch in: England Scotland Wales Ireland and Suffolk will be hosting the stake festivities. |