Last for the ight. Hope you like it. Comments are welcome. Critiques also.?

Question:"cold comfort"

You sat and you just watched,
As I nearly kiked myself.
Never was I was so betrayed,
you would sacrifice my life.
For no more than your comfort,
you mean nothing to me.
You are just a coward,
the antithesis of friend.
Take action before there is
no one left to now defend.
I would have walked with you,
through the seven gates of hell.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "cold comfort"

You sat and you just watched,
As I nearly kiked myself.
Never was I was so betrayed,
you would sacrifice my life.
For no more than your comfort,
you mean nothing to me.
You are just a coward,
the antithesis of friend.
Take action before there is
no one left to now defend.
I would have walked with you,
through the seven gates of hell.

"Kiked?" "Never was I was so?" Get some sleep and then rewrite this. Sweet dreams.

harsh night tonight
well you know what they say life is a *********
not one of your best but good

I know you meant well, you just need some sleep like the above poster said. Repost it when you've slept some and make it better. Don't let good ideas go bad, okay?