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Question:please vote for my poem in this poetry contest... im in the semifinals.... please if you will....

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Sometimes it rains
Sometimes it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I’m feeling so blue
You cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can’t stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
my life is so bland
I wish we could be
But I cant change who I am.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: please vote for my poem in this poetry contest... im in the semifinals.... please if you will....

http://poetry.com/Publications/display.a...


Sometimes it rains
Sometimes it pours
Sometimes the pain
Closes all doors

One day without you
Just goes to waste
I’m feeling so blue
You cant be replaced

My dreams are of days
When we were together
I can’t stop and gaze
Without rain in the weather

I wish you could see
my life is so bland
I wish we could be
But I cant change who I am.

wow!!! that's really good! if u hadnt told me u wrote that i would ave thought that it came out of a book!!!! u should totally win!

Hey i Voted! thats really deep
i wish i could just write poems that easily.

I'm going to totally vote. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!