Still crazy?

Question:I had a dream
that you save me
Woke lonely still crazy
A dream so clear
I wish you were here
I’m never as happy
As you made me
You betrayed me
I’m still crazy
You can’t save me

Yet I dream.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I had a dream
that you save me
Woke lonely still crazy
A dream so clear
I wish you were here
I’m never as happy
As you made me
You betrayed me
I’m still crazy
You can’t save me

Yet I dream.

the flow is amazing, as is the detail of the emotion

great work!

Sheryl said I was talking in my sleep last night. She says that I said, "I won't pay it."

See, even in my sleep, a cheapskate!

Sometimes is just takes a while get over it and to let them go.

Excellent poem. I added editing notations, but they are not necessary.

I had a dream
that you saved me <--- added the "d"
Awoke lonely still crazy <-- changed to Awoke
A dream so clear
I thought you were here <-- changed wish to thought
I’m never as happy
As you made me
You betrayed me
I’m still crazy
You can’t save me

Yet I dream.

I l?ved it!!! Wicked sweet poem!!! i give it a perfect ten out of ten!!!! 10's all across the board *the crowd goes wild!!* YOUR AWSOME, my fav. poem of the day is this one!! keep it up!!

Yep , you're crazy :P

I like it,
really good.