Spring haiku?

Question:Blue sky, filled with sun,
All creatures play, ignoring
rain on horizon.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Blue sky, filled with sun,
All creatures play, ignoring
rain on horizon.

Ta Dah! A proper Hai'ku...

Nice, nice nice!

Please send the moisture here, we need it!

Are you the watchful parent here? The lull before the storm? Ignorance is bliss? Whatever, nicely said.

Very lovely. It sound like fun and reminds me of when I was a child and could see the storm clouds coming, but we didn't care. Thanks for the memory.

Wonderful! It can be read on several levels, as with all good poetry.

And sometimes we creatures even dare to play in the rain. Well...me that is. Thanks for this romp through spring in seventeen syllables.

Perfect 5-7-5 symmetry.

You have created a vivid image of Spring -- it is lovely.

I like it, very nice! I hope you keep writing, i love reading poetry!!

You are most definitely enjoying Spring today.

wow! sounds good! im writing a spring haiku too >->
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