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Question:Sadness, madness, hand in hand.

Walking, talking, human beings.

Loving, crying, some times dieing.

Living, we are always trying.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Sadness, madness, hand in hand.

Walking, talking, human beings.

Loving, crying, some times dieing.

Living, we are always trying.

I like it. It's got a hypnotizing rhythm to it, and it all ties together. It's a very general poem, just about life in the end, but I think it captures our actions well. It's kind of sad (or maybe it's just the mood I'm in). It makes it all seem pretty pointless, and never ending. Yet we'll always keep on going coz that's the way we were made.
Did you write it?

I like it.

It seemed kinda short and didn't really have anything new about it. It was just another poem. No real deeper meanings or good imagery, or metaphors.

Honestly, not much. I like the repetitive stuff, but there isn't enough content to make it a truly great poem.

Keep trying though! Good luck, you have the makings of a great poet.

i'm reading it more like ordinary phrases style.
and i only get the last phrase.

madness gone, sadness come
walking tall, talking none
while love's true, cry sometime
while lungs breathes, try one try some

Very good....except that one word is misspelled.....it is Dying, not dieing. Other than that, I really like it...especially the last line. At least, most of us keep trying....some just give it up, and end it all.....so sad.