Is this POEM good best answer gets 12 points.?

Question:in my dark and stormy life
you came in and made it bright
and showed me what love was like.
But then as the days passed
I soon realized it wouldn't last
my heart resembled a broken glass.
the peices of my heart were lost
i new right then nothing could cost
more than the pain you caused my soul.

I didnt think of this on my own I had help from a friend she has some very good poems for 14

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: in my dark and stormy life
you came in and made it bright
and showed me what love was like.
But then as the days passed
I soon realized it wouldn't last
my heart resembled a broken glass.
the peices of my heart were lost
i new right then nothing could cost
more than the pain you caused my soul.

I didnt think of this on my own I had help from a friend she has some very good poems for 14

http://answers.yahoo.com/my/profile;_ylc...

yes it is very good. It is kind of interesting, but i think there is still some missing from the story within the poem. There just seems like there should be more. I think it ended at an odd place.

It's okay, but not all poems need to rhyme. Sometimes poems that don't rhyme, have more meaning in the end.