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Question:it tok me under 10 min to writ dis i like to writ about my feelin for sumone. i know i need to work on my grammar and how to put them together but i am trying to learn i am still in high skool

I am not the person you think i am
i am not that bad of a guy just
because the way look and what i wear
i am a nicer guy than you think
i wont hurt you at all
and i would be their whenever you need me
i would respect you and treat you different
from all other guy around you
i dont have to have a quick relationship
like all the other guys
i want you for who you are
i know their are alot girl out there
but i think you the one for me
and the one i love
i am not asking you to marry me
i am asking to give me a chance
and i will make a different
i will be the one who would hold your
hand until you die

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it tok me under 10 min to writ dis i like to writ about my feelin for sumone. i know i need to work on my grammar and how to put them together but i am trying to learn i am still in high skool

I am not the person you think i am
i am not that bad of a guy just
because the way look and what i wear
i am a nicer guy than you think
i wont hurt you at all
and i would be their whenever you need me
i would respect you and treat you different
from all other guy around you
i dont have to have a quick relationship
like all the other guys
i want you for who you are
i know their are alot girl out there
but i think you the one for me
and the one i love
i am not asking you to marry me
i am asking to give me a chance
and i will make a different
i will be the one who would hold your
hand until you die

I would be your wings if you needed to fly...
I would be your shelter if you needed refuge from the rain...
No shadow would ever grace youf face, so long as i am at your side;
Let me prove myself to you...
Let me embrace you, until you feel you need freedom...
and even then, i shall wait;
~*WinglessAngel*~

I like it its creative. plus its romantic keep it up

i say its pretty good.

you would get a good mark on it. =D