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Question:Feel as though I'm speaking Chinese in an Italian bakery
Meat marinades listed
In detail
to an audience of Vegans
Accidentally
For I did not mean to bring this six
To the A.A. meeting
I was only picking up a few bobs on the way home
Only trying to ease the chore-load
On my sweet mother.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Feel as though I'm speaking Chinese in an Italian bakery
Meat marinades listed
In detail
to an audience of Vegans
Accidentally
For I did not mean to bring this six
To the A.A. meeting
I was only picking up a few bobs on the way home
Only trying to ease the chore-load
On my sweet mother.

Ye gads I feel like this a lot of the times, like a doughnut in a health food store! :O)))

I like it a lot! (the poem, not the doughnut)

I really like it. It's like most of us, we don't feel understood or feel like we're always doing something wrong,like sticking our foot in our mouths, when we're trying to just get through life, or even do some good. You should send it in somewhere.

A vegan alcoholic! A chuckle emerges, a laugh perhaps for a few more bobs. Absent the mind, nicely put.

I'm certain your mother appreciated the effort! I enjoyed it, still puzzled over meaning, but what the hey!

It happens to all of us eventually, Go home , put you feet up and watch the telly.

Robert

This is neat! Like it, especially the first line. *snaps*

Actually, I often feel this way - as if I've just landed on a strange planet and don't know the rules yet.

i like to keep a steady drip of beer flowing on the tongue at night...just to keep relaxed. vegans are just boring to me, so i found that funny that you used them.

HA!

Yeah, I liked it too. Vegans at a McDonald's Anonymous. LOL. I see a left sided profile and a liar.

I hear you. I often feel like a Martian trapped on Earth.

I have felt that way many times. Good one.