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Question:Would you say i am crazy or wat i knw my grammar isnt dat good but i am working on it

You were right there
and i didnt take the chance
i might even lose you forever
i felt like the world have stop
when i saw you with someone
i didnt know what to do but i know
i still have feeling for you all this time
i know you have some for me to
but i am just scared to tell you how i feel
and how much i would love you
i wouldnt hurt you like all the other guys
i wouldnt make you do stuff if you dont like it
i want to love you not like all the other guy with
their lies
that you have dated
i know i will love you as much i love you now
my feeling wont go way because i know you the one for me
i try to forget about you
but your still their and i am still waiting for that chance
even if i have to wait for years
i will still be their waiting for you
and i will tell if i get the chance
and tell you that i will always LOVE you forever and ever
until the end


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Would you say i am crazy or wat i knw my grammar isnt dat good but i am working on it

You were right there
and i didnt take the chance
i might even lose you forever
i felt like the world have stop
when i saw you with someone
i didnt know what to do but i know
i still have feeling for you all this time
i know you have some for me to
but i am just scared to tell you how i feel
and how much i would love you
i wouldnt hurt you like all the other guys
i wouldnt make you do stuff if you dont like it
i want to love you not like all the other guy with
their lies
that you have dated
i know i will love you as much i love you now
my feeling wont go way because i know you the one for me
i try to forget about you
but your still their and i am still waiting for that chance
even if i have to wait for years
i will still be their waiting for you
and i will tell if i get the chance
and tell you that i will always LOVE you forever and ever
until the end

Very nice this should be shared with you two and I hope it does well to this is something coming from your heart and love is a very strong word for anyone.

depending on our acquantance....

i think i would run for the shotgun.....

too much phil collins going on....

too much 'if i can't have you, no one will' going on....

I'm trying to get a person out of my head..this isn't helping :'( LOL

I understand your words, I have been there.
Its quite hard, but if you feel it to be right.
Go ahead, if it doesn`t work out, its sad yes.
But even love hopes.

may you end up with your girl.

and for the poem... i'm sorry but it more like what you want to say to your girl.

jealousy won't kill me, but when you're gone i will
not having you won't stop me from loving, only when i die it will