I am tired of censorship Here is a poem I wrote Could you kndly comment.?

Question:"we'll protect you"

Genuflect at the feet,
of the great and glorius yahoo.
They keep us safe from ideas,
and make our world so vanilla.

Do not chat, thats a fact,
or you could be deleted.
Does not matter whether or not,
The question is completed.

You know it's just for our good,
keep it clean and safe, benign.
The crap I read is so subline,
I think things need to change.

It is time for a revolution,
The internet is ours.
It is ours to do what we will,
genuflect again... I don't think so.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "we'll protect you"

Genuflect at the feet,
of the great and glorius yahoo.
They keep us safe from ideas,
and make our world so vanilla.

Do not chat, thats a fact,
or you could be deleted.
Does not matter whether or not,
The question is completed.

You know it's just for our good,
keep it clean and safe, benign.
The crap I read is so subline,
I think things need to change.

It is time for a revolution,
The internet is ours.
It is ours to do what we will,
genuflect again... I don't think so.

Woohoo!! I can see you rideing a white horse out to battle with a sword in your hand.

Down With Yahoo!!

Way to go.
I like this one very much.
Nice work:)

I give it about an hour before some Yahoo Nazi has this removed.

Good luck

...i take it you're a bit fed up with yahoo atm...
i thought it censored "crap"? obv not..

pretty good, for a rant. and there's a very good point. sometimes, vanilla just isn't good enough.

I love the first stanza!

I agree, but I see their point about the chatting since Yahoo does have a chat program, but, yeah...

I totally agree with the message but I think it needs a little more work. :)

I like. Also agree about use of the word "vanilla". As you gathered already I am not fond of vulgar and "crap" is close. The last line to me is weak although the intent is obvious. "Genuflect no more, we arise" perhaps a different way of conveying your intent.

Dare I agree

Second verse has perfect meter and rhyme, so how about verse three saying
I think it's time we crossed the line/or variation's on that - instead of need to change?
sublime

I`m with Silent Anger on this one. You GOOOOOOOOOOO.
Here`s a star.

Good one from the man from LaMancha but you are jousting at windmills. Even though, I like it.

I dont like it. Its trivial you need to expand a little

yay!
i'm not the only one that thinks this way!
lol
i will try to post
will you read?

YOU TELL EM!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!