Poem again....?

Question:not very good... i dont know

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Why cant you see
Im not making it up
Who am I to be
Something made up

Why cant you like me
I cant be anyone else
Why cant you see
I am myself

I need not pretend
For you to like me
My heart would mend
If youd believe in me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: not very good... i dont know

Untitled

Why cant you see
Im not making it up
Who am I to be
Something made up

Why cant you like me
I cant be anyone else
Why cant you see
I am myself

I need not pretend
For you to like me
My heart would mend
If youd believe in me.

NICE POEMYOUR A GOOD POET

What is the question ? I'm afraid your poem is not very good , but keep trying :)