Poem again?...?

Question:ive also posted this one before i just want more feedback... i dunno... 1--10 rating.. im only 13

I love the way
Your hair covers your eyes
I love the way
Your smile makes me sigh
I love the way
Your blues eyes smile
And the way
That I stare into them for a while

I hate the way
Your making me wait
I hate the way
We arent fate
I hate the way
im torn limb from limb
And the way
That ill never be him

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ive also posted this one before i just want more feedback... i dunno... 1--10 rating.. im only 13

I love the way
Your hair covers your eyes
I love the way
Your smile makes me sigh
I love the way
Your blues eyes smile
And the way
That I stare into them for a while

I hate the way
Your making me wait
I hate the way
We arent fate
I hate the way
im torn limb from limb
And the way
That ill never be him

I love it the one of the best poems ive read on yahoo in a while and ive read alot

1-10? 11. =) It's cute... =)

aww that is so cute

if i heard that poem i would fall in love

10

i luv it its rlly good, honestly. Especially the last part because i didn't get it at first and i had to look back and reread it but thats what i like about the poem so dont change that lol
so 10