Please Read My Best Poem?

Question:Beauty

Face of such beauty, you've mortified Venus,
Unmatched by the ones called divine.
Caring for all, when they don't care for you;
Know that you are so sublime.
Into the troubles you go to make peace,
No challenge is too much for you.
Gaining my love with each step that you take;
Burying helplessness, building anew.
Incognito, you will take no rewards.
Teaching the children of humility.
Changing the world with the wisest of words,
Honor is yours for eternity.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Beauty

Face of such beauty, you've mortified Venus,
Unmatched by the ones called divine.
Caring for all, when they don't care for you;
Know that you are so sublime.
Into the troubles you go to make peace,
No challenge is too much for you.
Gaining my love with each step that you take;
Burying helplessness, building anew.
Incognito, you will take no rewards.
Teaching the children of humility.
Changing the world with the wisest of words,
Honor is yours for eternity.

that was alsome!!!!
i was into the words of your poem
(which btw was really good)
when bam!
i get taken off my train of thought by your hidden message
although i'm confused i still like this poem

LOL, you shouldn't have pointed out that it was acrostic.

Dam Good

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha

you should add a copyright line because people are going to be tempted to steal that.

i love acrostic poems.
such depth and boy she must be a nice person...NOT

I love yet hate love- hate relationships lol

Why did you do that? Tell me, I mean.

There was me innocently reading a beautiful poem and enjoying it, when bam......a nasty, horrible comment was revealed.

I bet you're not perfect.

You write so beautifully.
Oh my god.
Unequivically.
But i think you should
Add the definition to the
Second (sorry,first) word in the ninth sentance.
That one's pretty dificult,
And i think every one without a dictionary agrees.
Right on.
Do write more poems.please,tho.it was GREAT.

You're absolutely right! This IS your best poem(well, not really, really).
This tongue-in-cheek is absolutely great!!!! When a poem makes you ask yourself,"Now, why didn't I write that kind?",
it's a winner across the acrostic board!!!!!
Ever bet on horses? Then, you'll know that term!

Yes, but it's lovely...and then...no, never mind.

I noticed it right away. Very cool

Pretty cool and i love the messege .

only you would write this.
good job, you should try not to post the extra comments and see how many people actually get it. afterwards you can let everyone else know.

Umm... The rhyming words kinda suck. I suggest you write poems that dont rhyme from now on.

Besides that, its a nice poem.

if ur not already a professional.. GO BE JUST THAT! as a fellwo poet n dreamer i give you my props...