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Question:ok, i have to write a poem about what i wish to be free from....

i have no clue what i wish to be free from...can you give me ideas and clue, and hot to write the poem...

im freaking out over and my poem is due soon....

thanx for you help


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ok, i have to write a poem about what i wish to be free from....

i have no clue what i wish to be free from...can you give me ideas and clue, and hot to write the poem...

im freaking out over and my poem is due soon....

thanx for you help

I wish to be free from...

An angst, a pounding, rapping, rythem in my heart,
a pressure building behind my eyes,
my hands won't stay still,
wringing, wrenching, praying hands,
Where is my breath?
Why can I not fill my lungs?
I ponder,
stop,
I stare,
Into the distance and querry why my anxiety is so clear.

HTH! GL! this is just to help get your juices running, use it and change it to yours, or start it and see where it takes you.

Some ideas:
I wish to be free from...
-death
-poverty
-illnesses
-global warming
-"him" or "her"
Tips:
-keep it flowing.
-decide what kind of poem. Do you want it to rhyme or not?
-express the feeling and idea clearly
-give "feeling" into it. Don't just say "I wish to be free." Give more detail.

Hi Firend I like to help you .but I can't Help you in poems .

freedom from:

the expectations and conventions of the world;
the worries of tomorrow;
the fears for the future;
the stranglehold of money.