How does this make you feel?

Question:SUFFER
The sun rises
and a new day begins
I walk through this day as I have others
an impatent sanity clouds
my judgement and thought
only to make me insane
So i just walk
never really remembering my days
but remembering an endless cycle

Night falls
but without sleep
so i spend my night just as i did my day
a prisoner to my insomnia and depression
never knowing if i am awake and dreaming
or dreaming and not waking
not really suffering my life as it passes
but passing life as i suffer

and as it is to suffer
i feel no pain really
but in agony i sit endlessly and forever awaiting peaceful sleep to calm my waking hours
but sleep never comes so again i sit and await my fate
but fate never finds me
and so i shall forever suffer...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: SUFFER
The sun rises
and a new day begins
I walk through this day as I have others
an impatent sanity clouds
my judgement and thought
only to make me insane
So i just walk
never really remembering my days
but remembering an endless cycle

Night falls
but without sleep
so i spend my night just as i did my day
a prisoner to my insomnia and depression
never knowing if i am awake and dreaming
or dreaming and not waking
not really suffering my life as it passes
but passing life as i suffer

and as it is to suffer
i feel no pain really
but in agony i sit endlessly and forever awaiting peaceful sleep to calm my waking hours
but sleep never comes so again i sit and await my fate
but fate never finds me
and so i shall forever suffer...

True Inner suffering- inner pain.The minds eye ever longing from the depths of your sole for the overwhelming desire to be put into a blissful indevour just to rest & rejuvenate to sole.

I don't really know. But I do like it. It has depth.

thats good and inspiring i really like it dont stop writing and who knos were youll go lolz but its really good.............peace out girl scout

Wow.... very good

woah... its really amazing..

I think you have the base down , now feel free to experiment a little, try adding wit , humour , irony into your poems. Make it slightly less blend . Maybe a twist or something that will leave an impression on the reader. Good luck :)

It really doesn't make me feel sad. It's a good poem though.

I think I missed something here, I'm just confused.

Unique way to express your feelings on your insomnia. Thanks for sharing.

VERY VERY GOOD im at a loss for words
ive got a good idea you should write a book