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Position:Home>Poetry> I need a name for my poem, please help?Question:I strolled a long the river bank in shade of woodland trees watching as the dragonfly’s darted in and out the reeds Then I spied fisherman all white with webbed feet Are a hungry Herron out for bite to eat Than amongst the colours of every green you’ve ever seen I came across a waterfall in the mid drift stream Sunlight played in the waterfall a glory to behold Shining in it’s crystals turning them to gold Later I chanced upon a glade where I stop to have a rest There I saw a sparrow collecting Foliage for it nest It hoped n bobbed and skipped about as busy as could be Though it is a simple thing a pleasure it was to see. At first I herd there call then they caught eye A group Wild geese were silhouette against the sky They were flying against the backdrop of an amber sunset which crowned the dusk of a day I’ll not soon forget . Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I strolled a long the river bank in shade of woodland trees watching as the dragonfly’s darted in and out the reeds Then I spied fisherman all white with webbed feet Are a hungry Herron out for bite to eat Than amongst the colours of every green you’ve ever seen I came across a waterfall in the mid drift stream Sunlight played in the waterfall a glory to behold Shining in it’s crystals turning them to gold Later I chanced upon a glade where I stop to have a rest There I saw a sparrow collecting Foliage for it nest It hoped n bobbed and skipped about as busy as could be Though it is a simple thing a pleasure it was to see. At first I herd there call then they caught eye A group Wild geese were silhouette against the sky They were flying against the backdrop of an amber sunset which crowned the dusk of a day I’ll not soon forget . How about Simple Pleasures? Excellant poem by the way. This poem is very beautiful. May I suggest: As I strolled Along the Riverbank What my eyes Did See Meandering days of sunlight or trees of sunlight , dusk of dawn How about "Journey in Wonderment"? That seems to capture the essence of the poem, at least to me, why you wrote it and what you were experiencing. You know, there is somthing exquisitly beautiful about your poem. I think it is that you are discovering and marveling at the beauty of PRISTINE things (in nature), and that reflects on you, the writer. The fact that you appreciate these pristine tihngs so much and behold them in wonderment, is that you yourself are experiencing your pristine, untouched, inner spiritual heart and sharing it with the reader. enchanting with nature Colours of day Sunset geese Walking Along... lovely poem by the way. ? |