Stand the reign: poem?

Question:when it reigns it pours
crystal tears hit the floor
as you control me
you're my one and only
perched so high in the sky
are these violet lights
that are a subtle reflection of your eyes
but when it's cloudy
and mirky
and i can not see
when i need somebody
to comfort me

i embrace the darkness
in the heavens above
as it reigns down on me
i feel unconditional love
cleanse me with your tears
my angel please erase all of my fears
show me how to
be near you
so that i may be safe
as it continues to reign
drowning in this ominpotent solicitude
this ponderous burden of loving you
has weakened me
down to my knees
but that's fine by me
for this passionate sovereignty
has led me to believe
that it's alright
to be taken to new heights
by these waves of ecstasy i feel inside
i sit a glass bowl outside to capture
this down pour of rapture
this reign will never end
but that's okay as long as you're the ruler
my lover, my friend

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: when it reigns it pours
crystal tears hit the floor
as you control me
you're my one and only
perched so high in the sky
are these violet lights
that are a subtle reflection of your eyes
but when it's cloudy
and mirky
and i can not see
when i need somebody
to comfort me

i embrace the darkness
in the heavens above
as it reigns down on me
i feel unconditional love
cleanse me with your tears
my angel please erase all of my fears
show me how to
be near you
so that i may be safe
as it continues to reign
drowning in this ominpotent solicitude
this ponderous burden of loving you
has weakened me
down to my knees
but that's fine by me
for this passionate sovereignty
has led me to believe
that it's alright
to be taken to new heights
by these waves of ecstasy i feel inside
i sit a glass bowl outside to capture
this down pour of rapture
this reign will never end
but that's okay as long as you're the ruler
my lover, my friend

The Reign, your ruler. Beautiful!!! Your the sovereign, the servant, Majestic. That HIT me. Truly. the Rain is our Savior and our Ruler, Lovely comparison for a person. Keep Posting. Will Watch!!!

This reads like a bad rap rather than a poem. sorry. It's the continual stream of a beat rather than a flowing idea or emotion or description. your descriptive words are too grandiose, they over power the intended idea of being in love.