Honest criticism of my poem i know its not good but do you know what the hell I&

Question:shes my secret freind
when im in need
dosent tell lies, dosent pretend
to like me, there is no greed
in our freindship
there is only one goal
it allows me to take a grip
she makes it good for the soul
she always relaxes me
and soothes all my pain
she dosent let me feel guilty
and prepares to carry the strain
shes my secret freind
whou taught me to stay calm
she's with me till the end
and she's always on my arm

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: shes my secret freind
when im in need
dosent tell lies, dosent pretend
to like me, there is no greed
in our freindship
there is only one goal
it allows me to take a grip
she makes it good for the soul
she always relaxes me
and soothes all my pain
she dosent let me feel guilty
and prepares to carry the strain
shes my secret freind
whou taught me to stay calm
she's with me till the end
and she's always on my arm

i really like it actually i think its really good - is it about cutting?

It's pretty good just the way it is. Spelling isn't everything.

Be happy!

nicotine patch?

Honest answer? 24ct crap. The ramblings of a kid.

Hey - I read it - at least!

If it's from the heart - carry on!

Actually that's not bad at all. Don't change it
. Just be who you are abd speak from the heart.

Pretty good, but the spelling is awful

First step to improving it.....use the spell check, that's what it's there for. I'm not the best speller in the world either and I always use it.
Secondly, "secret friend", "only one goal", "allows me to take a grip." Hmm, is this about widow Palm and her five daughters?

Why post this ? It is a personal poem , no reason for us to read it

your watch you muppet!!1

Strong feelings, mediocre poem. I obviously know what you are talking about: having a soul mate. Do not give up, you can do much better than this.
P.S.: Art begins with CORRECT GRAMMAR!