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Somehow I seem to just always know,
what has passed by and what lies ahead.
Different shades and different shapes,
and in the end, I find it's just basic pain.

Words that you say mean nothing at all,
when what you mean is only a dream.
The things that I feel have all gone to rot,
the things that I hope for I will not say.

My eyes are wide open, yet I cannot see,
beyond the end of my Romanesque nose.
Silent waves roil in the black of the night,
laying to waste, all the love I can feel.

All of these cries of my broken red heart,
and all the echoes of a soft whispered sigh.
That time is gone, It will never come again,
God he has brought me straight to my knees.


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Somehow I seem to just always know,
what has passed by and what lies ahead.
Different shades and different shapes,
and in the end, I find it's just basic pain.

Words that you say mean nothing at all,
when what you mean is only a dream.
The things that I feel have all gone to rot,
the things that I hope for I will not say.

My eyes are wide open, yet I cannot see,
beyond the end of my Romanesque nose.
Silent waves roil in the black of the night,
laying to waste, all the love I can feel.

All of these cries of my broken red heart,
and all the echoes of a soft whispered sigh.
That time is gone, It will never come again,
God he has brought me straight to my knees.

Silent waves come crashing down on you too? I have been experiencing a really powerful urge to panic lately because things have been going so well. This is really more stressful than the unfortunate past that I have lived because it breeds fear of fear itself. but you're right in that we can't fight what we always know. At that, I am going to let this trend continue and ENJOY it; it can never be as bad as what has come before.

It's my birthday. Will you write something for me? Maybe help with how I'm trying to hold on to the dark and mysterious side of everything while living in the lighter plane of existence....

another good one from you...full of emotion

the last stanza is amazing

Loved that one.

I really liked this one.

Interesting as always.