Take a lok at dis one i just made tell me how to make it turn in to a real poem

Question:i am not dat good in my english but i like to writ dis stuff wen i hav nuthin to do and i never knw how to write a poem

Your the one I can picture living with
Your smile is all I need to make my day
It would be nice to see you by myside
All I need to do is tell you how I feel
I am just scared just scared
Telling you how I feel
That I like you all this time
I lost my chance and could lose you forever
But i would try and try again
Just to see you smile
Your the one that I love and always
Living a life without you isn't worth living
I know we can be together all this time
But I am just to scared asking you just to scared
Just the way you look you cant find it in anyother girls
Your the girl for me
And the one I would love forever and ever

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i am not dat good in my english but i like to writ dis stuff wen i hav nuthin to do and i never knw how to write a poem

Your the one I can picture living with
Your smile is all I need to make my day
It would be nice to see you by myside
All I need to do is tell you how I feel
I am just scared just scared
Telling you how I feel
That I like you all this time
I lost my chance and could lose you forever
But i would try and try again
Just to see you smile
Your the one that I love and always
Living a life without you isn't worth living
I know we can be together all this time
But I am just to scared asking you just to scared
Just the way you look you cant find it in anyother girls
Your the girl for me
And the one I would love forever and ever

poetry is spoken from the heart and if this is how you feel then you shouldn't change it except to correct the typing errors any other is 2 words take my word for it i write poetry and have several poems that have been published. I always find that my first version is the best

its really good you dont need to change it anymore

I haven't felt this in a while
Every time I see you smile,
You plant a seed in my mind
For you , my love is blind
And now all I want to be,
Is be by your side

But I am scared to tell you,
What if you don't feel that too ,
Then I'd lose you forever ,
Risk that , I could never

You could try to come up with rest , jsut make it short and simple :)