A collaboration between The Dark Prince and myself. Like it?

Question:Dark Anger

i cut my wrist,
and lift out a vein,
as i hold up the knife,
i anticipate pain.

Blood hits the floor,
with a sickening splash,
How can I do this,
my eyes feel a flash.

I fall to the floor,
my life in front of my eyes,
this is going to be it,
my final demise.

As the room spins,
I think to myself,
I've finally done it,
I'm all on my own.

I've always been alone,
i'm my own best friend,
so i'll die by myself,
and finally have peace.

But peace escapes the best of us,
I think I've found the opposite.
My time has come and now I'm gone,
no one to care, no one to long.

i lived alone, i died alone,
my life was like an empty picture frame,
now a blank gravestone sits above my head,
because no one knew my name.

Six feet under is now where I live,
the worms and the grubs, they live off of me.
If only one thing I could right,
I'd live life again,this time no more light.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Dark Anger

i cut my wrist,
and lift out a vein,
as i hold up the knife,
i anticipate pain.

Blood hits the floor,
with a sickening splash,
How can I do this,
my eyes feel a flash.

I fall to the floor,
my life in front of my eyes,
this is going to be it,
my final demise.

As the room spins,
I think to myself,
I've finally done it,
I'm all on my own.

I've always been alone,
i'm my own best friend,
so i'll die by myself,
and finally have peace.

But peace escapes the best of us,
I think I've found the opposite.
My time has come and now I'm gone,
no one to care, no one to long.

i lived alone, i died alone,
my life was like an empty picture frame,
now a blank gravestone sits above my head,
because no one knew my name.

Six feet under is now where I live,
the worms and the grubs, they live off of me.
If only one thing I could right,
I'd live life again,this time no more light.

i swear...the two of you combined.....I'm even more speechless than ever....it's hard to tell which line or stanza is which...i know the first stanza is Kara's....i saw it on her blast...i would love to do a collaboration with either of you but...I'm not good enough...definitely not good enough...i hope to get as good as Kara at least by next year.....i really hope so...

Sorry personally I dont like poetry about suicide its sick!

Please read my poem people I need answers ive only had 1 answer.

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EDIT.... Your only 13 I thought you was a lot older you have very sophisticated writing your very good for your age but you do have some dark thoughts.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm.....ok personally i am not to fond of poetry about suicide either, but i will still appreciate it. It takes something and makes it super personal. so i say good job and it flowed very nice, but again i am not to fond of the suicide part. srry.

That was FAN-FCUKING-TASTIC. You and the Dark Prince
together,OMG.Thumbs uuuuuuuuuuuuuuup

I like it but we lost fucus towards the end. Suicide as a topic for poems is perfectly valid. If u don't like it ...don't read it. and certainly don't comment on it if you are biased in the first place. Good job my young friend.

I'm not biased against suicide. However, I do recommend that you take time to creatively end yourself - should you choose to do so. My standing recommendation (at least until someone takes me up on it), is that anyone considering it should commit suicide by tomato.

To my knowledge, death by tomato has not been the direct cause of death in any suicides in recent memory (trust me, I Googled it).

Here's how it works:
Step 1:
First, find a sufficiently large tomato (I'm talking a Georgia plumper, like 3.5-4 inches across).

Step 2:
Open the mouth as wide as possible and shove that sucker down the throat.

Step 3:
Just suffocate to death (that process shouldn't take too long).

Trust me - this will have people talking for years. It's bound to make national headlines, if not international - and it will keep the authorities guessing (especially if you don't leave a note!). They won't be able to classify it as suicide because, come on - why would someone kill themselves with a tomato? On the other hand, they won't be able to classify it as a homocide, because - come on - why would someone murder someone with a tomato?

. . .still waiting for someone to actually do this.